My book

My book is about a family of vampires and a girl that falls in love with one of the vampires named Edward.
The girls name is Isabella but she prefers to be called Bella instead. She just moved to a small town called Forks where everybody knows everything about anybody. She lives with her dad who is the sherriff of the town.
She is absolutely breath taken by the thought, the sight and just everything about Edward. She is a dark haired girl with a very very light complexion. She is a very imaginative person and she is always very curious about things when it comes to people and her surroundings. Until Edward came aruond she had never been in love before. In her eyes he is just perfect.
Edward is a very pale and dark haired boy. His eyes are almost almond. He is a vampire with special "gifts". He can read minds and transport very fast and he has the ability to be very strong but he cannot read Bella's mind. But most of all the most important gift in his eyes is being in love with someone like Bella.
By what i have read about Edward so far i think that he is amazing and if i had the power to i would change every guy in the world to be just like him.
The way he talks to or about Bella is just so soothing and it makes you just wish that you could be her. He is just very romantic and his words are so beautiful.