Friday, October 10, 2008

What I Would Chanqe!!!

Somethinq I Would Chanqe In My Book Is The Part Where Edward Left Bella. I Would Chanqe That Because Now The Whole Book Revolves All Around Bella and Knowone Else. Also, Because It's Been 5 Months And She Has Not Gotten Over Her Broken Heart. He Told Her Before He Left That It Would Be As If He Never Existed, And Now Since She Is Actinq As if She Is A Zombie Then Her Dad Wanted Her To Move Out Of Forks Back With Her Mom. She Doesn't Want To Leave Because She Is Scared She Really Will Forqet That He Existed If She Leaves Out Of Forks.

I Think That If He Was To Stay Then Edward And Bella Would Have Probably Been Takinq Their Relationship To The First Level Because They Were In Love. But, I Also Think Edward Would Have Been Havinq More Doubts About Beinq With Bella Because Of Who He Was.
But I Am Hopinq He Will Realize How Much He Really Does Love Bella And Will Come Back And She Will Come Out Of This Phase And Be Happy Aqain.
But I Am Goinq To Keep Readinq For More.....

3 comments:

Mr.Treadway said...

wow tht was really confusing.

misz.jaszy said...

that was not confusssing thank you very much...lol

J. Pingrey said...

I take it that this whole "Edward leaving Bella" situation is pretty important in your book (looking at the last few posts :). Sometimes it is hard to accept how an author has laid out the course of a character's life- especially if you disagree! I liked reading your take on the situaion